Screamplay Thursday #9

ARRRGGHHH.  I think I may have killed it.   And not in the good way.

In an attempt to make Newton less of a cookie cutter buddy, I’ve completely rewritten his character.  Which meant rewrites to Paul’s dialogue.  I guess the good news is that it is three pages shorter.

Start on page two of the script, I’ve made changes throughout, although some of it is still familiar.

The Wheel – Draft 5

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