Screenplay Thursday #8

Here ya go – freshly tweaked throughout –  The Wheel – Draft Four.

As an added bonus – dedicated to my peer group for suggesting the alternate second-to-last scene, which surprisingly I think a prefer –  The Wheel – Draft Four Alternate Ending.

Suggestions?  Comments?  Which pre-ending do you like:  the scene between Kali and Paul, or the one with Kali and Newton?

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